Worlds at War is done! The second edit added greatly to the story and I was able to clean up much of the language. It was difficult to write at times because it is a period piece that occurs at the turn of the last century at the end of Victorian England.
My internet has been acting up were I live so I have been unable to upload it to Amazon for the Kindle or to begin the publication process for the paperback copies.
I am really proud of what I did with this because I wrote it in four months! I think that I formatted it well and I feel the stories flows well with a few surprises along the way.
As always I enjoy feedback because it makes me a better writer.
I will spend tomorrow trying to get it loaded into the Kindle system and hope to have the paperbacks available for order by Monday.
I would like to thank everyone that has commented about my writing to me and I sincerely hope that my writing keeps you entertained.